Final Essay Activity

Objective: to complete and submit final; and wrap up course

Final Essay; submit your final essay; students read each others final essay in last class

Wrap Up:

  • accomplished sentence structures (grammar + sentence objective in a paragraph) for various topics and paragraph formats
  • vocabulary level for topics has improved through research on the internet and also usage (using) in essays
  • build argument: we care about how we present our ideas in writing – increases the meaning of the essay content – well done; but of course you can improve with practice
  • personal development in writing (everyones style is different), and please continue to write and develop your style – practice skills
  • accuracy in writing by doing objectives based in this course will continue to improve writing structure
  • do not focus on grammar

Super English: currently Super English is the spoken course for this program

  • two times a week – different days (Tuesday and Friday)
  • the current teacher is Kan Asano
  • the focus of the class is to prepare for speaking in a natural setting (situation)

Pre-Task: Essay objectives

Aim: To prepare an essay on any topic in Japan OR course subject at Iwate University

Objective: To write an “academic proposal” about a topic or subject

Procedure A: Write the following proposal sentences;

  1. Write a Title
  2. Introduce your topic / subject
  3. Give a definition
  4. Explain 1st main point about your topic / subject
  5. Explain 2nd main point about your topic / subject
  6. Write a sentence explaining why you selected this topic.
  7. Write a sentence to give your opinion

Procedure B: Research 3 websites on the internet for essay information, copy and paste the URL links under the title “Research”

Submit: email to iwatesensei@gmail.com in a word document by Wednesday 22nd 6pm

Final Essay Objectives

Aim: To write your own essay; select the content; decide the paragraphs – and the paragraph style/format you think is the most suitable

Specific Objectives:

  • you need a Title
  • each paragraph needs a heading
  • each body-paragraph word count is between 65 – 80 words (the total word count is 400 words – (380words to 420words))
  • introduction paragraph 65 words
  • summary paragraph 65 words

Review objectives:

  • submit a draft essay
  • review given by teacher
  • objectives to complete given

9. Writing exercises using APA

Aim: To conduct writing exercises, and practice APA methods for paragraph citations (use previous essays) and referencing:

  1. Referencing
  2. To read and understand the writing format rules and writing regulations for official documentation.
  3. Exercises: cite and references: practice in class using previous essays

LINK

Online Class – available Friday 17th, 18:40

Select a previous essay and re-write your essay, make improvements to your:

  • paragraph structure
  • sentence style and sentence ordering
  • select another website to improve your research content
  • improve the vocabulary – terminology
  • write a new and improved int (title) and introduction / summary (paragraphs)

Submit: bring to the next class on Wednesday

  • if you have any questions please ask. I will check also in Mondays class 27th

iwatesensei@gmail.com

Essay: Topic 10

Aim: Research a topic based on any topic related to your study, OR, research a global issues such as 1) climate change; 2) food shortage; 3) energy crisis; 4) health risks; and 5) economic concerns

Method: For writing, please complete these research objectives

  • Website 1: Main information – select a website that has a lot of main points (3 to 5). Select two main points:

when you think information is important or most important, write about it 

consider (to think about) the most relevant main points to your opinion(s),

  • Website 2: research Main Point number 1 more
  • Website 3: research Main Point number 2 more

Writing Format: Write 65 word paragraphs for each body paragraph

Review: I will correct, and I will teach you how to write an Introduction & Conclusion Type 1. Please email me your essay Introduction and Conclusion – I will check it and give you the objective below.

Complete essay after review: Type 2 Introduction and Conclusion

8. Introducing & Evaluative conclusions

Aim: To write an 1.Introduction & 2.Conclusion (evaluation). Bring your task to the next class, Monday 13th.

1.Introduction: Or “Pre-Introduction” also called an Abstract: Write a paragraph to introduce your University and course to exchange students from America

Objective: To explain your university; course; and subjects (75 words)

2.Conclusion: Write an evaluation describing things you like and don’t like about your course and study

Objective: To explain the positive points and negative points – in your opinion (75 words)

Teacher demonstration

Steps

  1. You need to write a question about your topic. First research 2 websites for information. Read the information and think about a topic-question
  2. Next, give two short statements to answer your question; statement 1 is website 1 & statement 2 is website 2
  3. Then Give your short statement: Explain what the statement means in one full sentence
  4. Continue to write you paragraph. Provide information-details to build your information (argument)
  5. Each paragraph total word count: short response:statement:details (75-100words)

Then show me in the next class. In the next class on Wednesday we are going to crossover details between website 1 and website 2 for the next writing objective. The main objective is to compare details of information to help build your argument.

Final Essay

Aim: Select a topic from the Gandai course. If you select the same subject, then choose a different and new topic

Method; Using the objectives in this course, write a 450 word essay about your topic.

Procedure: Write your essay in a word document (A); complete a sentence by sentence discourse on your essay in PowerPoint (B)

Essay Format:

  1. Title
  2. One line statement
  3. Introduction
  4. Body Paragraph 1 – content based
  5. Body Paragraph 2 – content based
  6. Body Paragraph 3 – content based
  7. Body Paragraph 4 – You can choose between content, or opinion (full paragraph)
  8. Conclusion: summary or other (make your own conclusion)

Remember these points:

  • experiment with your sentence types
  • develop your writing style that you want in the future
  • there is no right or wrong
  • continue to be descriptive in your writing – add meaning to your sentences (remember my examples in class on Monday)
  • ask questions and tell me your ideas on Wednesday (10 minutes each)

Dec 8 – Advantage and dissadvatage

Aim: Is to write a body paragraph for Adv and Disadv

Method: is to use a mirror or a reflection writing format; and other methods

Topics. Finish this sentence. The adv and disadv of __________________ .

  • SNS
  • working a part-time job
  • wearing masks all the time in public
  • belonging to a club or circle
  • studying in the library

Procedure: Open a PowerPoint and do a pre-task. The pre-task is to write your own criteria before you start (such as a template).

Teacher example: Mirroring method

Advantages

  • introduce the topic: Adv of SNS
  • Introduce the benefits – research FOI
  • Support sentence – FOI and some statistics
  • Provide examples of SNS which are popular
  • Expereince – good
  • Conclude

Dissadvantages

  • introduce the topic: Disadv of SNS
  • Introduce the demerits – research FOI
  • Support sentence – FOI and some statistics
  • Provide examples of SNS which are causing probelms
  • Expereince – not good
  • Give a warning

Teacher example: Other methods

Advantages

  • Provide examples of SNS which are popular
  • Introduce the benefits – research FOI
  • Support sentence – FOI and some statistics
  • Expereince – good reason A
  • Expereince – good reason B
  • Conclude – for the above reasons there are Adv of SNS

Dissadvantages

  • introduce the topic: Disadv of SNS
  • Introduce Problem A
  • Introduce Problem B
  • Introduce Problem C
  • Problems personally exoereinced
  • Conclude

Techniques: using the PowerPoint method

  1. open your slides
  2. title slide
  3. contents slide: Adv & dissadv
  4. Adv slide 1 – Provide examples of SNS which are popular
  5. Adv slide 2 – >>>>
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  10. >>>>
  11. Conclude – for the above reasons there are Adv of SNS
  12. Disadv slide 1
  13. >>>>
  14. >>>>
  15. >>>>
  16. >>>>
  17. >>>>
  18. >>>>
  19. >>>>
  20. Conclude – for the above reasons there are Adv of SNS