Aim: Is to consider the order of the sentences we write:
Title: The Importance of both Diet and Exercise for your health
Introduction
- give an opinion statement (one sentence) about the topic – first sentence connects to the last sentence
- identify the main points (information in body paragraphs)
- identify some similar or differences for each body paragraph (main points)
Body Paragraph 1: Diet
- This sentence links to the first sentence in the introduction
- Example: FOI (Fact of Information). The importance of eating foods from the five food groups is recognized as healthy eating [1], for example eating fruits help keep your blood pressure low [3].
Body Paragraph 2: Exercise
- This sentence links to the first sentence in the introduction
- Example: FOI. Daily exercise is recommended for your health to keep your heart strength stable and as previously mentioned, exercise and fruits is good for a low blood pressure reading[2][3].
Conclusion
- give the significance for knowing more about this topic
- mention some interesting point or fact or opinion about the information you researched
- summerise what the subject is about
- restate your final opinion – last sentence connects to the first sentence
Note* [3] Fruits are a good way to get the vitamins and minerals you need for a stable diet. People who generally eat fruits regularly have a low blood pressure.