Essay 2 – 8/10

Repeat with a new topic for the general topic list. The objectives are the same, however, paragraph 1 is now 2; paragraph 2 becomes 1.

Drafting: to check the format writing and our objectives, including;

  • First sentence is a topic sentence – paragraph focus
  • FOI – Fact Of Information;
  • Support sentence gives an example about the FOI
  • Statistics are required ( you need statistics to support your idea(s);
  • Keep your idea simple and do not try to write to many ideas in 1 paragraph = 1 idea
  • Final sentence should support the topic sentence (first and last sentences are related.