Class 11/19 – 26 Writing Activity

Aim: To prepare for the next task (Pre-task); research the internet

Topic: Energy in Japan; debate theme

Question: To have or not to have Nuclear power – global debate topic

Agree = We should use Nuclear power in Japan

Disagree = We shouldn’t use Nuclear power in Japan

19th Research Pre-task: search two website for FOI paragraphs; do not writ your paragraphs yet – search for websites first: take notes about the main points.

26th Writing process; two body paragraphs

  • Agree or disagree (select)
  • If you agree; your first body paragraph is agree; your second body paragraph is disagree; and vice versa
  • select the content from your websites – and write the FOI

Agree paragraph: for example;

Write facts of information that you agree with. If you don’t agree with the information – write it in your next paragraph. And vice versa;

Research Writing: Follow the below format; body paragraph 3

  • Write an opinion paragraph
  • Find information you agree with – and say why you agree with it
  • Also find information you disagree with – and say why
  • Give one or two examples how you think the topic is important for Japan’s future

*its important to say things you both agree and disagree in your opinion paragraph

Send your three body paragraphs by Monday 12pm: I will correct and comment and send back to you!

Class 12/11

Aim: Select an economical problem

Objective: Write the following format; search two websites and write FOI – paragraphs; then write a summary paragraph; then write an introduction paragraph.

Steps: in this order

  1. Website 1 – FOI paragraph 1 (60-70 words)
  2. Website 2 – FOI paragraph 2 (60-70 words)
  3. Summary paragraph – (25-30 words)
  4. Introduction paragraph – (25-30 words)
  5. Website 1: URL [copy and paste]
  6. Website 2: URL [copy and paste]

Essay 2 – 8/10

Repeat with a new topic for the general topic list. The objectives are the same, however, paragraph 1 is now 2; paragraph 2 becomes 1.

Drafting: to check the format writing and our objectives, including;

  • First sentence is a topic sentence – paragraph focus
  • FOI – Fact Of Information;
  • Support sentence gives an example about the FOI
  • Statistics are required ( you need statistics to support your idea(s);
  • Keep your idea simple and do not try to write to many ideas in 1 paragraph = 1 idea
  • Final sentence should support the topic sentence (first and last sentences are related.

Writing Level Check

Day: October 7 18:45 – 19:45; word document; submit via line when you finish – writ your name at the top of the page, and student number

Tasks: plan your time; write each section separately (small paragraphs)

  1. Write a short introduction about yourself (25-35 words)
  2. Describe yourself (25-35 words)
  3. Explain your course work and study (35-40 words)
  4. Introduce your department at Iwate University to an exchange student from America (25-35 words)
  5. Do you think working a part-time job is important for university students? Explain your answer. (35-40 words)
  6. Explain a problem in Japan. Give your opinion about this problem. Is there a solution you recommend. (35-40 words)

Repeat Essay

Aim: Evaluate your own writing from previous essay work. You can use your new knowledge about writing and decide how you are going to re-write the essay.

Procedure: Look at previous essays and decide on re-writing an essay that you want to;

  • expand the essay information by researching different websites
  • add a paragraph to the essay – the type of paragraph? (please decide)
  • you might want to add new ideas or writing concepts (methods) to the essay. For example: write the essay differently (use the old websites – and do it again)

Requirement: is to write between 350 – 450 words.

Steps: Check your previous essays; next decide what you think you are going to do; then begin;

Objective: please consider your impression about the topic; and also include your opinion in the essay (some essays we had no opinions, they were FOI – facts of information type essays).

Recording Ideas starts with first impression.

Aim: To write your first impression after reading sources of information.

June 11 – Writing Objective: Using your first impression in an essay often gives the reader your exact starting point about a new topic.

Method: Write the following information;

  • What were you thinking about when you were searching for information, for the first time?
  • After reading information; what then did you think?
  • After all, what is your impression about the topic?

For Fridays class; write a topic introduction about the information you researched;

Word limit 100 words – 125 words.

Include your website information URL at the bottom of the introduction.

In the next class you are going to read each others topic introduction, before we continue.

June 14 – Writing Objective: Writing your opinion; using website information to support your opinion – this technique is used academic writing and research notes.

  • Identify your opinion
  • research the internet for 1 or 2 more websites for information to support your opinion.
  • Write a body paragraph 100 – 125 words
  • Show me (teacher) and then; email me before Tuesday’s class
  • Final writing objective will be given; at Gandai Tuesday 18th class G38

Strategies for supporting your opinion; include the following:

  1. Find as much information as you can from different websites
  2. Find information from one website and focus on specific details
  3. In addition; you can also support your opinion by using video source (media news)

Strategy 1 is the broad method. You can quickly read and reference some information that you need. It is sometimes difficult to find information from other websites.

Strategy 2 is the narrow method. It might take a long time to find one website with the exact information you want. If you have a good website, you can use the details to give reasons to support your opinion.

Post Graduate Research Strategy: Find a website that does not support your opinion, and mention it. (Only for Strategy 2).

[We also have Miyu’s short club activity presentation.]

Double Referencing

Aim: Is to combine information and to give FOI (facts of information) to create your idea or concept in an article you are writing.

Aim:

Diet and Exercise: Both diet and exercise is equally important. I want to say that you can not effectively diet without exercise. Also, I want to say that exercise will benefit the most if you eat well.

Source of Information 1: A study showed that people who maintained a strict diet without caring about exercise gained little health benefits.[1]

Source of Information 2: A well respected scientist and doctor in low intensity exercise recommends that you need to consider the foods you eat to gain the most out of exercise.[2]

Task: Write a sentence to say the aim.

Writing Essay

Aim: to write an opinion about a topic. This is a short study examination for undergraduate students. When you are finished leave the classroom; there is no word limit. There is not test result or feedback.

Thank you for your responses!

Duration: 45 minutes 6:30-7:15pm

Method: Answer the questions below. There are 6 5 tasks. Sometimes writing less is better than writing too much. No word limit. Do not write outside the space provided.

  1. Watch the video one time; write your first impression.
  2. Watch the video a second time; What impresses you the most about this mn in the video
  3. Why is this man doing this? Do you think there is a benefit for him?
  4. What impact do you think this video has on the audience watching it?
  5. Does this video inspire you to make your own video? Explain why or why not?
  6. Is there a country you want to visit after watching the video? Explain?

Video:

May 28th: Online Class / May 31st

Aim: Write a proposal; to prepare for a speaking assignment

Objective 1: Draft Writing Stage: You are a university student, and you want to start a new Club or Circle at Iwate University.

Tasks: Write the below tasks – 4 short paragraphs (105words)

  • Describe Iwate University 20words
  • Explain the theme of your new Club or Circle 20words
  • Give three benefits for members 45words
  • Explain what is different about your Cob or Circle – compared to another Club or Circle 20 words

Submission: Please bring to the next class on Friday

Objective 2: complete your other essays, and show me on Friday. I will correct with you (man-to-man)

Objective 3: To prepare a PowerPoint using your proposal.

Method: follow these steps; Create 5 slides

Example draft proposal (Objective 1)

  • Title (circle name) & why you chose this as your idea
  • Introduction explaining your circle
  • Give the idea
  • Give the suggestion
  • Conclude with a final statement: idea; benefits (who benefits); summary

*If you have any questions LINE me anytime

National Geographic Book

Aim: How to read and use a text for research

Method: I will make some recommendations for you about how to read a text for research;

Word limit 450words

  • Photocopy the text and highlight the main information
  • Keep a list of topic vocabulary
  • Make a list of English and Japanese for difficult words
  • Write sentences that explain information
  • At the end of each book section; write your thoughts or ideas in English
  • At the end of the book, re-read sections of the book you want to study more deeply
  • Then research other sources of information; website or video
  • Complete the same note taking of these sources
  • Think about information that supports the textbook (National Geographic) information – main source
  • Keep your notes organized – write them clearly.

Example Text: Standard of Living

Comparison Research Method