Introduction
Global Warming is the increase of Earth’s average surface temperature. – definition
Because of effects of greenhouse gases, like , carbon dioxide emissions from burning fossil fuels or deforestation. – explanation sentence about the cause – effects
We believe that the cause for Global warming trending now is Humans with Green house gases in results when the atmosphere traps heat radiating from Earth toward space. – specific cause (support sentence)
Certain gases in the atmosphere block heat from escaping. – explanation
Today global warming can danger us and can cause Typhoons and Tsunamis. – concern ( a reason to worry about something)
We cause Global warming by burning fossil fuel and cutting trees and deforesting. – introducing deforestation
Deforestation is a result of people cutting down trees to make things. – Example sentence
Therefore when we cut trees down we cut the process for contributing to carbon dioxide which makes fresh air for life. – example sentence
Scientist today think that humans cause global warming and due to this theory some do not believe in this theory and oppose it. – opinion verse opinion (opposing opinions)
Solution
Managing forests and agriculture methods will be introduced and later linked to how we can make an impact at a low cost to the effects of global warming: – Sub Paragraph Title (introduction – topic sentence)
Taken together, tropical deforestation and emissions from agriculture represent nearly 30 percent of the world’s heat-trapping emissions. – Statistic to highlight the problem
We can fight global warming by reducing emissions from deforestation. – Solution idea 1
Development of the next generation of low-carbon technologies will be critical to deep mid-century reductions in global emissions. – Reason (why we need to do something)
One way to fight global warming is in nuclear power as results show us, an increased share of nuclear power in the energy mix could help reduce global warming – S1 explanation
Impact on climate change must include financial assistance from richer countries to poorer countries – new idea to add to the solution idea – to help make the transition to low-carbon development pathways.
Advantages
Agriculture, increased growing season in Greenland – Sub Title
Improved agriculture in some high latitude regions have been recognized. -statement / based on facts
Environmentally, an increase in green plants activity in high northern areas are well obesrved. -FOI
For example results observed inclde increased plankton (energy from) wood and plant materials in the North Pacific Subtropical Gyre Area. -example
The arctic is melting, and as a result an ice-free Northwest Passage provides a shipping shortcut for export markets between the Pacific and Atlantic Oceans – causing and effecting
An economically increased market for example in cod fishing leading to improved export and the Greenland economy has been a opportunity for residents to make an income- result leads to gain (plus)
To conclude the recent increase in forest growth, ocean surface water, oceans uptake of carbon dioxide, may provide some opportunites in Agriculture but also has led to the future for global warming to continue. -results / findings