Draft Writing to Final May 14th to May 21st (No lesson on 17th)

In this process you are going to decide your final information. This means the following;

  • How you format each paragraph; article information; video; web; can be combined or separated.
  • It depends on the topic of each paragraph.
  • The first sentence in each paragraph (week2/3) is a topic sentence. This paragraph is about….
  • Referencing your sources; include the numerical number source 1 [1]; source 2 [2]; and source 3 [3]. Reference in order
  • Your own paragraph; a reflection of the previous 3 paragraph information; are opinions, thoughts and ideas, suggestions; and other recommendations you decide based on the information. All the content should be part of the reflection.

Wording strategy: based on writing 20%-30% more information than you need – only for body (content) paragraphs (3). Then complete your essay. Then delete content you don’t need.

How do we decide content we don’t need?

  • if you delete the sentence and the paragraph meaning does not change, delete it
  • combine two sentences as one sentence (balance what you delete)